Hello
@PMason247 , this is a lot better than your first version!
I liked the relaxed apporoach and the way you started the solo!
You are the only one at this point that let me hear the II7 chord that then becomes minor.
The II that is dominanth and then becomes minor and "engage a II- /V7/ I maj7 cadence is common in many tunes.
I just want to grab this occasion that you gave me to speak to everybody here on the forum.
Outlining that changes in our improvisation is important.
PMason did it on that chord, but it is important to do this on the whole chord structure.
A big part of my study is transcribing solos by ear from records.
If you play a great solo by a great player without any accompaniment you can hear the changes.
No matter if is Gordon, Coltrane, Sims, Getz, Mulligan, Adderley, Rollins, Parker or an another player.
All of them had their style but they always outlined the changes with their phrasing.
It is not easy, but the important part is that the saxophone can make the changes, maybe less explicit than a piano, but it can play the chords and outline the changes.
I suggest everybody to play a chorus of arpeggios (only chord tones) before starting to improvise.
This can make us a clear "chord map" in our head that can help us both soloing and keeping the structure without getting lost.
This is even more important if you want to learn how to play unaccompanied.
For example take the acapella intro on my "crossthing" record, the first video at the beginning of this thread.
I started freely, but I entered into the chorus at 0,29 then I stopped at 1,00 on the V7 and played a cadenza on that chord, then at 1,01 I played a turnoaround I/VI7/ II-7/ V7 to make clear to the drummer where I would bring in the tune and the beat.
That logic comes from the chord changes.
And I improvised on the chorus with just bass and drums but keeping in my mind that I wanted to make the chords clear to the listener. At least I hope I did it...