I really don't know what to think of it other than this is your personal interpretation of the
bombing of Guernica, Spain, depicted in illustration by Picasso, entitled 'Guernica'
Later on, a German soldier had asked Picasso if he did this, and Picasso replied...."No, you did!"
Nice that you showed another element of yourself.....
Odd that you would put up something pertaining to Picasso....
I'd like to hear the sax higher in the mix?? Unless that's what you intended??
I really like the soundscape, your playing and everything about this but don't get the lament side. Just sounds soft and somewhat pleasant. It is a contrast, works musically, but (for me) doesn't embody the emotional content of a lament.
Take a listen to the pavane (by either or both) Faure or Ravel. These are calm, beautiful but just rip you apart with their sadness.
You've got the contrast but I don't hear the sadness of a lament.