Better and better. No one can say you're afraid of playing long tones! It's certainly working with that tone becoming very consistent. OK bring on the dynamics and time to start tweaking that very precise tone.
Can't tell from your intro whether this is your own composition. It's very good regardless and suits the title.
Brendan, I hope that doesn't mean you fell asleep half way through it. Thanks for listening and the comments. Wade, the tune is by "Horace Silver", I just added a 4 bar intro. It's odd in the fact that the tune is only 20 bars long and just AA form, btw what are "Long Tones"?? Thanks also for the comments..