Sean, it sounds good, some nice embellishments on the melody. Lots going on in your solo, the odd Rollinsesque phrase. You are not helped with the backing track, seeing how this is a love song it's kinda hard to be expressive with no help from the backing. For me the solo was good but had to many notes in it, perhaps longer notes with some feeling/vibrato could have been used?? Hey, it's your solo at the end of the day, I'm just thinking out loud. Still enjoyed it though, thanks for posting..
Chris..