I think this is better, but it's still not quite right. If you listen to the guitar lines that you're playing against at times the soundscape placement makes it seem like he's closer to the microphone and you're in the background. This could be due to two factors, volume and the amount of reverb you're giving yourself. Your sound is too far back behind what should be the background.
The next track on soundcloud gives a much better example of being at the right placement in the soundscape. All the instruments have the same degree of reverb and the sax sounds at the right placement in the soundscape as the primary (melodic) instrument.
It's easy with your fine playing to not be listening to the sound engineering, which is a completely different exercise with its own technical demands for maximizing what is ultimately heard.