Man that's a fantastic start, good on you for having the cojones to let us hear your first works. Now, as Kev said, you need to go to the doorbell section and tell us all about yourself. We're a nosey bunch so we need to know all about you. (We'll give you a right proper welcome too)
A great way to start,sounded fine to me,obviously a very brave first attempt but it certainly had a lot going for it,and far better than I have managed to post which is nothing so far and I've been at it 3.5 years now.Looking forward to hearing you improve and I'm sure you will very quickly.