Nice ballad choice Chris....I do believe your tone is pushed a bit and that's a god thing.
I've always suggested to you to project and you're doing so here. don't worry about wrongs notes. I like wrong notes!
You aren't in a smoke filled hazy room are ya? That's how I picture this.....Of course, you're sitting down with your head sort of in a downward position....
If it was a smoke filled room the fire alarm would go off and I'd be through the window. Then again 7 floors up it might not be a good idea. Thanks for the comments Mike..