It's getting like juke box jury on here. That dates me don't it? I liked it. It took a little while to get going which is maybe why folks are getting the feeling of it being a little long, but when it got going it was hot. I didn't find it too long. It's hard not to run out of ideas on a 5 minute track but you kept it going. The sax does dominate in places and it's hard to hear the band. Rather than looking for a way of cutting it down you could try a rhythmical riff or theme at the beginning to develop and come back to. Just an idea. It made me want to join in on Baritone, which must say something good.